Here is SOME OF my new story with 508 words not including the title our the who made it (ME):
The Adventures of Lilly S. Anderson
BY GRAYSON BOHLENDER
One day in Greenwood, 10 year old Lilly was sitting on her front porch drinking pink lemonade. Her little sister Jessie came out and said “ Lunch is ready”. Lilly went and sat at the table and began to pray. “ Dear Jesus, Thank you for this wonderful day and this wonderful food, Amen”. Infront of Lilly sat two meatballs, brocilli, and a glass of milk.
She ate and went to her Cinderella room. She picked her brown hamster named Kiwi and
Said “Im bored”. She decided to write a letter inviting her cousin in Downtown Hollywood down to Greenwood. It read
“Dear Cicelia,
Hows Hollywood? I just wanted to invite you to Greenwood.
Hows Kirt, Franklin, and the rest of the family? Well, gotta go
From,
Lilly S. Anderson”
She put in a white envelope and mailed it off to Cicelia.
The doorbell rang and Jessie rushed to answer it. It was
Lillys best friend, Hannah. She had long, brown hair and was 9 years old.
“ Can lilly come over?” asked Hannah as Lilly rushed down the stairs.
“ Hi Hannah, how are you doing?” asked Lilly. Hannah said “ Good, want to come over to my house?”. “Sure” said Lilly. “MOM, IM GONNA BE AT HANNAHS HOUSE” yelled Lilly. “OK” said her mother.
Lilly and Hannah went down Harbor st. and saw 5 Greenwood Ducks up on the beautiful ocean shore. They passed Jacks Fish and Chips. They rode on a Greenwood Duck and the tour was beautiful. Lilly had to go home because it was a school night. She finished last minute homework and went to bed. She woke up to realize it was not a school night because it was Friday last night and she jumped with delight. She did her Saturday
Chores and ate a breakfast of waffles and syrup. She helped Jessie clean her room so Jessies friend could come over, And then Lilly headed off to Hannahs house. She and Hannah had to go to Joes to buy some milk for Hannahs mom. They entered to win a trip to Anchorage, Alaska. They figured they wouldn’t win, but they entered anyway. A couple days later Lilly gets an phone call saying she won the contest!
Of course mom made a list of all the educational places to go. Summer Vacation started
Yesterday so they went. They flew on a DC-930 plane. She got a pair of pilot wings and some playing cards. She looked out the window and saw 2 herds of caribou.
Back at Greenwood, a letter got addressed to Lilly Anderson arrive. It was from Cicelia.
It read
Dear Lilly,
I’m coming out to Greenwood in January. I know it’s December, but we can wait.
Sincerely,
Cicelia Langer
But people lived in there house while they where gone. They forwarded it to Anchorage Hotel, where they where staying, the next day. At 8:00 that night, Lilly read Tammy, her baby sister, a bedtime story. She read “Little Red Riding Hood”. Finally, the next day, they landed in Anchorage.